Above is my first draft of my trailer. I showed this version of my trailer to the class members that were part of my target audience. Below is the feedback that they gave:
This
feedback helped me massively as, although there were issues present
that I was aware of, having more viewing opinions highlighted problems
that I had not considered myself. When gaining this feedback, I realized
that the two most highlighted areas were the problems with sound
issues, and the fact that my trailer somewhat resembled more of a short
film due to too much of the plot being hinted, and giving too much away.
I was well aware that there were sound issues due reoccurring problems I
kept enduring on Premier Pro and when indeed filming, yet having more
opinions confirmed that these sound issues were something that needed
work improving. In terms of my trailer resembling a short film and
steering away from the trailer form, this is a problem that I had not
yet considered, yet looking back on my first draft, is a viable point
and needed to be amended. Other than these improvements, my class
responded in a positive way and confidently gave me positive feedback.
This confirmed that I had constructed a trailer appropriate for my
target audience.
When it came to amendments, from this feedback I intend to:
Replace title slides that give too much away with a Daily Mail review
Not make it clear that only one is left (giving away plot)
Add faster clips present for a shorter period of time to create fast paced trailer action
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